Hey,
My name is Ammal. I'm a nearly 14 years old female who loves poetry and working on publishing her own poem book about how kids life's are while living in the streets. Please add me as a friend if you dont mind.
I would be very delighted if you could read and comment on my poems! I would appreciate honest opinions!
Thankyou very much
Regards Ammal
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My name is Ammal. I'm a nearly 14 years old female who loves poetry and working on publishing her own poem book about how kids life's are while living in the streets. Please add me as a friend if you dont mind.
I would be very delighted if you could read and comment on my poems! I would appreciate honest opinions!
Thankyou very much
Regards Ammal
_♥♥_____♥♥_ Put this
♥___♥_♥___♥ heart
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__♥_____♥__ page if
___♥___♥___ you love
____♥_♥____ someone
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- Last seen on Oct 27 10:35 AM. Member since July 29.
- I'm a peridot parrot poet for 37 comments.
- My mood is
, and quote is "I always say If you dont shoot the basketball in the basket you will miss it 100% precent and the people who hesitate are the people who take long to achieve what they want! and that is never me! ". - I am a 13 year old girl (United Arab Emirates)
- When I'm not writing, I'm Studying.
- I have 37 comments, 8 poems
My Poetry
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I wrote this to bring a smile to your face
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This poem takls about how kids are feeling so depressed and feeling alone that they dont have anybody that would listen to them and they ar20 lines, 2 comments, August 3. In Abuse, Pin, damaged heart, fear, culture, hope in god, kids, children, suffering
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This poem talks about the kids living in the streets with broken hearts and how people are so proud of themselves when they shouldn't be!12 lines, 4 comments, August 3
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this poem is about a guy who works 3 jobs a day and cant feed his family22 lines, 8 comments, July 31
Guest Book
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peridotPixi on August 4hi, i came to look at your page, sorry its taken me a long time, i have a busy life.. and allpoetry isnt the focus of it anymore, i am looking forward to reading your poems
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Little Lesley : Need to go... on August 3Hey I need to go but if you want to contact me, just send me a guestbook! I'll be back on in about 17 hours though...it's 9:45 here if you want to know and I'll be back on tomorrow at 3:45. That's 17 hours away. I hope you could get on when I'm on sometime.
P.S.I added you as favourite but I need you to add me as favourite before we are friends. I'll be back at this same time tomorrrow as well! -
Little Lesley : Hello! on August 3Hello, and welcome to StoryWrite/AllPoetry. Would you like to be friends? I heard you are a fan of my poems! I've been hoping alot of poeple comment on my poems. I love people commenting! Anyway, I would be commenting your poems soon! I've been studying hard and only get little time on the computer!
P.S. I think you're a great commenter!
