I am a writing novice, I hadn't written since school, until recently when i met somebody who inspired me.
I am enjoying immensely the challenge it is giving me, and am finding it a great outlet for making sense of my thoughts.
Some of what I write is about things i have experienced,and my main motivation to begin with was to express things that had confused or hounded me. Of course though, there is a decent proportion that is just from my imagination!!
I tend to write in a way known in some circles as word soup, that is get it out, then move it around. I am being taught now, by a man of talent & knowledge, how to use the structure, imagery, rhythm, and all facets of the poem to add to its impact.
Its always nice to hear someone has liked you're work, but i also like to hear what has gone wrong, and whether the effect I intended has been successful. As I am concentrating now on improving my poetry through its structure and imagery, comments on that would be greatly appreciated.
I am enjoying immensely the challenge it is giving me, and am finding it a great outlet for making sense of my thoughts.
Some of what I write is about things i have experienced,and my main motivation to begin with was to express things that had confused or hounded me. Of course though, there is a decent proportion that is just from my imagination!!
I tend to write in a way known in some circles as word soup, that is get it out, then move it around. I am being taught now, by a man of talent & knowledge, how to use the structure, imagery, rhythm, and all facets of the poem to add to its impact.
Its always nice to hear someone has liked you're work, but i also like to hear what has gone wrong, and whether the effect I intended has been successful. As I am concentrating now on improving my poetry through its structure and imagery, comments on that would be greatly appreciated.
- Last seen on Aug 21 9:26 AM. Member since June 14, 2007.
- I'm a peridot parrot poet for 44 comments.
- I am a 27 year old woman (United Kingdom)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student studying philosophy, or working .
- I have 44 comments, 66 poems
My Poetry
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I glance at your neck A white crease in your brown skin
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Sometimes I wander to a place Not made of gingerbread with fairies fluttering by13 lines, October 10, 2007
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Our amphitheatre, a vicous circle with no victor, reoccurring until both are slayed.
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photay.poetry on July 16, 2007whats with this?!? you have no comments?!? you know whats really nice?!?
to come to your page and down at the way bootom someone give you a acompliement when you have none. but its way in the bottom? but it there!
so heres a compliment!! um . . .?i am not so good wiht those? how about a joke?umm. . . well you a great write so just ingnore me! and dont worry. i dont know about what but peopel like hearing that!
