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Alittle2lostShow poetry

A little too lost
A little too broken
A little too beaten
A little too hurt

A little too desperate
to know what she's doing,
A little too cheap
to know what she's worth.

A little too tired
A little too calloused,
A little too worked
A little too worn.

A little too busted
to have pride in his life,
A little too sad
to be glad he was born.

A little too torn
A little too hopeless,
a little too wasted
A little too gone.

A little too far
to try and turn back now,
A little too blind
to see he was wrong.

A little too used
A little too frightened,
A little too weak
A little too slow.

A little too helpless
to be able to run,
A little too scared
to know where to go.

A little too over
A little too finished,
A little too short
A little too done.

A little too young
to know life ends so quickly,
A little naive
to think they had fun.

  • Last seen 1 day ago. Member since September 9, 2006.
  • I'm a diamond love poet for 215 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is ""nothing but myself since the day i was born"".
  • I am a 22 year old woman from California (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a sister and a friend.
  • I have 215 comments, 4 contests, 95 poems

My Poetry

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  • Every day at work
    at around six,
    25 lines, 3 comments, October 13. In Life, Personal, Thoughts
  • You know that feeling when you buy a box of Cracker Jacks
    And you don’t even want them, you just want that
    35 lines, 5 comments, October 8. In Life, Love, Personal, Thoughts
  • He’s young,
    but wise beyond his years,
    15 lines, 3 comments, October 5
  • Have you ever had a thought in your head that was so strong you couldn't breathe?
    That is when I write. When the whirlpool in my mind starts spinning fast enough that it spits out phrases that catch in my throat. Sometimes i
    4 lines, 1 comment, October 4. In Personal, Thoughts

Guest Book

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  • Rat -DFW Punk- on February 10
    thanks for the honorable mention... i want to invite you to my contest, there is still a week until judging and i have gotten some good entries but not enough... you seem like you would understand the prompt more so please enter (find the link to it on my author page)
  • ThaliaLaughed on October 22, 2006
    Hmm... a comment.... Uhm... Oh! I know... MAGRATHEA! ... no wait... that isn't right... uhm,....OH! DUH! ... *clears throat*.... I walked into the woods because I wanted to live deliberately.... hmm... close.... AHA! *smacks self upside head*.... I love you! And I love your poems! And I think you should write more because that would make me happy. And we like happy Manda. :-) I LOVE YOU!!! Teehee... *turns to others* This is my twin. *proud smile* *supergirl poses next to the Kirsten*
  • Alittle2lost on October 9, 2006
    I would not mind at all if you added me to your favorites. to be completely honest, i'd be most flattered.
  • velvet marie on October 9, 2006
    would you mind at all if i added you to my favorties? i don't know you, at all, but i do know that i love some of your poetry.

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