Hi my name is Alan Bishop and i live in southyourkshire in England. I am 22 years old and started to write poetry when i was just 16 years old and been writing poetry as a hobby since. I really enjoy writing poetry and hope you like to read them. My poetry is based on Love, Life and Comedy. Most of my poems are about feelings, the way i felt at the time of writing them. I'm in the middle of writing a book called Love, Life and Comedy and hope you will look for my book in the future. Thank you for reading my poetry and hope you enjoyed them.
This is one of my poems about me!!!
No Means Of Beginning.
I grew as a good lad,
Regardless of livings,
By the time I hit twelve,
I had no means of beginning,
I stole cos I had to,
No way to get by,
The nice way of living
Had gone over night,
I still want the good things,
I’d change if I tried,
But with no means of beginnings,
I failed with no tries,
So hoping with, must gets,
I wait stood in line
Till I reach all my goals
And be happy in life.
I would like all your feedbacks on all of my poems please.
This is one of my poems about me!!!
No Means Of Beginning.
I grew as a good lad,
Regardless of livings,
By the time I hit twelve,
I had no means of beginning,
I stole cos I had to,
No way to get by,
The nice way of living
Had gone over night,
I still want the good things,
I’d change if I tried,
But with no means of beginnings,
I failed with no tries,
So hoping with, must gets,
I wait stood in line
Till I reach all my goals
And be happy in life.
I would like all your feedbacks on all of my poems please.
- Last seen on Nov 10 8:16 AM 2005. Member since August 13, 2005.
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- I have 118 comments, 31 poems
My Poetry
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I’m looking forth,
Onwards I’ll climb,14 lines, 2 comments, August 30, 2005. In Personal -
If god be true
I’d live my life,20 lines, 2 comments, August 24, 2005. In Personal -
I guess my soles are wearing thin,
This roads to long I have to give in,16 lines, 2 comments, August 24, 2005. In Love -
Ropes Are Rough, But Lace Is Tougher.
“Hello you now ring me back”16 lines, 3 comments, August 23, 2005. In Personal
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ForeverFarAway on September 30, 2005hhhi remember me you looked at my poem (i look) any ways just wanted to say hi and how are you? well iam of now so come by any time i got a lot of new poem if you want to look at and thanxs for cometing on my stuff if you did not know i had a thig on my pg that says if you comett on my stuff i will maybe come on yours to comett and you are 1 of thos people to get me to comett on your stuff!!!
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Jaded Lily on August 24, 2005Hi,
I thought I might stop by to leave a little gift for you. Thank you for the reads tonight and I will be back toot sweet to return the favors.
Lily ~*
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devilont on August 23, 2005keep up the good you have something specail happening there
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Starfyrewynds on August 14, 2005Thanks for the comments and such, you're a good poet... Keep the work coming, and thanks again.-Star/Kai
