So, I was told of this lovely site by a close friends and figured I would give it a look. After all, why not, it is always so interesting to get comments back from other writers, whether they know what they are talking about or not. Give great joy on many occasions. Besides this, I am simply bored and need some sort of an event to pass the time, and ripping apart people who try and make themselves seem high than they are by agree with those higher or putting down those higher is always a great pass time.
NOTE NOW: I AM A NATURALLY SARCASTIC PERSON! It is nothing personal if I'm snide or anything with you.
I read poetry as not from the writer saying it but from a speaker separate from the writer. I will refer comments to 'you' though. It's just how i am and how i was raised to read poetry.All my English teachers told me this.
If I offend you, please please tell me. I do not mean to and I will ease up on comments (or stop if you ask) and explain myself. I never mean to be mean to anyone. (***EXCEPTION TO THIS: If you start something with me and insult me in anyway, I'll take it out on your writing and then on you, I'm just like that. I get defensive. After being tormented most of my life and keeping my mouth shut until it nearly killed me, I now have the problem of over defending sometimes. I'm trying to find that middle ground, but you have to bare with me. It is a hard thing to do.)
I don't comment on people's lives or personality or such while I'm commenting poetry. If I feel a need to tell you something, I'll message or add a quick PS to the end of the comment. NEVER are my poetry comments about the poet.
If I seem harsh in my comments, I mean well. Many on here I believe have a strong chance of being published someday if they stick with it and polish up a bit. But if I ever take it a bit far, tell me and I'll ease up and apologize. Again, I don't mean to offend.
If you ever have a question about a comment I give or anything you want clarified, message me. I'm happy to help. ^^
^*Adden Lee
NOTE NOW: I AM A NATURALLY SARCASTIC PERSON! It is nothing personal if I'm snide or anything with you.
I read poetry as not from the writer saying it but from a speaker separate from the writer. I will refer comments to 'you' though. It's just how i am and how i was raised to read poetry.All my English teachers told me this.
If I offend you, please please tell me. I do not mean to and I will ease up on comments (or stop if you ask) and explain myself. I never mean to be mean to anyone. (***EXCEPTION TO THIS: If you start something with me and insult me in anyway, I'll take it out on your writing and then on you, I'm just like that. I get defensive. After being tormented most of my life and keeping my mouth shut until it nearly killed me, I now have the problem of over defending sometimes. I'm trying to find that middle ground, but you have to bare with me. It is a hard thing to do.)
I don't comment on people's lives or personality or such while I'm commenting poetry. If I feel a need to tell you something, I'll message or add a quick PS to the end of the comment. NEVER are my poetry comments about the poet.
If I seem harsh in my comments, I mean well. Many on here I believe have a strong chance of being published someday if they stick with it and polish up a bit. But if I ever take it a bit far, tell me and I'll ease up and apologize. Again, I don't mean to offend.
If you ever have a question about a comment I give or anything you want clarified, message me. I'm happy to help. ^^
^*Adden Lee
- Last seen 1 day ago. Member since February 29, 2008.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 147 comments.
- My mood is
, and quote is "Life is too exciting to wear boring socks.". - I am a 19 year old woman from Arizona (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a nursing student and a CNA..
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/de_slayer
- I have 147 comments, 3 contests, 31 poems
My Poetry
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Flour and sauce covered cheeks,
the kitchen in pieces,10 lines, 1 comment, August 23 -
Analytical thoughts on analyzing pieces,
Editorial on polished writes,5 lines, 2 comments, April 20 -
It is standing in the open moonlight
Casting shadows over the night7 lines, 4 comments, February 8
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Snap.Crackle.Pop on February 11thanks, but i dont need help revising my poem. i like it just the way it is. and i have no idea what you are talking about with the punctuation?
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kathykool : Hi on October 22, 2008check out my poems!!!!!
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SupplicantSoul : Hey there on October 22, 2008Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. I'm feeling my way around the site for the most part and I appreciate your warm welcome. I'm glad you liked my first submission, feel free to be as harsh as you see fit on anything new
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Irish-Maiden : Hello SEXY!!! on March 1, 2008Yes you finally have an AP site!!!
I heart you forever and ever, oh and guess what... want to hear a secret?
I LIKE PIE TOO AND WANT TO HAVE OOBLES OF FUN!!!!
