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when i write a poem its me trying to understand what others are going through,it helps me to be more compasionate

Last seen on Feb 22 2:37 AM 2008. Member since October 6, 2006.
I'm a carnelian hope poet for 93 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "no one has a hold on me i am free to do what i please".
I am a 14 year old girl (South Africa)
When I'm not writing, I'm painting or reading.
I am in the groups The Commenting Community
I have 93 comments, 13 poems

My Poetry

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brOken

Battered broken Bruised dead there she lays / Suffocating in a coffin filled already with prescription / Having Consumed one pill too many

22 lines, 5 comments, June 26, 2007. In Pain, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts, Society, Dark, Personal
gentle rAin FAlls

Gentle rain falls / Calming my being / gentle rain splashes softly against my face / Running down my cheeks like tears / Silent tears / Sil

17 lines, 4 comments, June 23, 2007. In Nature, Thoughts
A Prison in Itself

lost in a spectrum / Locked away in the furthest of crevasses / Enchanted by love broken to dead / The sound of peace / The echo of silence never far away / Time to walk along the cobbled path

38 lines, June 21, 2007. In Fantasy, Love, Life
The tuMble weed

Would it not be amazing / If we could set every hurt ablazing / If we could just walk away;walk away from it all / Leave our fear behind some random wall / Only to have a gust of wind so light so

23 lines, 2 comments, June 12, 2007. In Fantasy, Thoughts

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ialem. : thank you on February 4, 2007

thank you for your comment..it's really my first poem..i hope you really liked it.. tnx..
hydrokronics on October 30, 2006

thanks for the comment i dont know if this is how you leave a a commenbt to others that commented you thats a tounge full but its really one of my first poems i have written others but not like that ...

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