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Rene Almovodar
May 5 1984 - June 14 2006
REST IN PEACE
============================================================================
My beloved husband
of the soul and here in DarcAbby Empire of Azeroth
is DARC RAVEN I am proud to have him as such
============================================================================
My AP Family:
Mother(s):
Native Spirit
Spirit Mother
Niece(s):
Hidden Girl
Son:
JT Sammer
Daughters:
Forever Dreaming
MoonlightBeam
Water Dragon
Satanic-angel.
Uncle:
Cupids Chokehold (Justin)
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My Vampyre Family:
Mother:
BlueIsisQueenRaven
Daughters:
Spirit Winteria
Moonlight Beam
Water Dragon
Son:
Kennek DrakenSire
Uncle:
CountCrimsonMaryian
Nieces:
There are to many to list but I love you all.
Nephews:
Immortal Beloved
(on permnant Ban)
Sisters:
RosesViolentLullaby
VengenzeFell2Hate aka Silveren DrakenSire
Brother(s):
Kira666
Alastor236
Dante Drakensire
Wife:
My love and husband :
Darc Raven
If I have missed you it wasn't intentional. MY vampyric family is extensive and I dont' even know them all. This is the ones I do know
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My Character sheet for this character:
Name: Abariel Avarus Ravox(translates to "Raven")
Nickname or Alias: Abby
Race: Vampyress
Organization/Kingdom: DarcAbby empire of azeroth, Vampyre Family Avarus, Maryianove Dynasty others.
Age: 5000
Age appears to be: 48
Hair: Long to the floor worn usually down except in battle when it is in a pony tail or braid
Color: Raven Black with Gold tip highlights
Style: worn usually down except in battle when it is in a pony tail or braid
Eyes: Emerald Green
THAT ARE HIDING:
black with red pupils when angry or hunting
Height: 5'4 1/2
Weight: 150
Physical Build: muscular
Dominate Hand: right
Alignment: Normally good but will fight when I need to.
Equipment:
Weapons:Three Swords,Purity, and Death Purity is a white sword imbuded with the power of wind, Death is a black sword imbuded with poison and will cause death in the most horrible of manner an Angelic sword(summoned) Cuts the soul not flesh and all things of the void given by Darc Raven The only thing able to counter it is a daedra weapon and then only slightly., a soul sword picked up from when Fez Oldaron was killed in the forest of the damned by the listener, Three Daggers Fear Hope and Justice, Fear is imbuded with the ablity to terror in those it hits, Hope is imbuded iwth the ability to created utter hopelessness in the one it hits, And Justice is imbuded with the ability to make the one it hits see the evil deeds they have done causing insanity. A number of daggers and different throwing stars and poison darts upon my person All have poison in their blades and darts, All blades and stars are imbuded with the power to return to their owner, This includes the swords and daggers Soul Snatcher...once a bullet from hits it's target, the person or creature goes straight to hell without fail. (( Can be fused with elements and spells. )), Amulet that allows vampyre to go out into the sunlight given by her brother Dante Drakensire,A pair of armbands with silver blades that retract into them worn under long sleeves so that they are not seen given by Dante Drakensire
Clothing: Loose top and leather pants except in battle when I wear my battle armour of front plate, back plate , leggings and a helmet that goes all the way down my neck(all made out of tough dragon hide and scales almost completely damage proof by swords or daggers but there are open areas that can be hurt) and the gauntlets that have claws in it.
Special Abilities: healing, teleportation, conjuring, summoning, flying, shapeshifting and more as I learn the abilities.
Magic: (able to make daggers solid out of shadows and create images and just about anything your imagination can come up with that is why it is called shadow magick) Shadow magick, elementals wind, fire, water, ice, and earth(tires after several hours of using it), conjuring, and more as I learn it
Character Persona
Special Features: the darktree tattoo on my shoulder, a M for the maryianov ArchKnight tattooed into the base of my throat, various scars all over my body
Personality: Leader/follower quiet most of the time but will speak up amd say what she thinks especially when she thinks someone is being abused verbally or physically
Background/History:
Born on a small island in the Carribian. Her parents were purblood Vampyres who were killed by humans and lycans.
She was raised by foster parents who were both also pure blooded vampyres. They told her the story of her parents death and how they came to be her foster parents. The foster father taught her how to fight so she would never be unprepared and the foster mother taught her how to cook and hunt for food so she would never starve.
She when old enough left her island home in search of those that killed her parents and ended up wandering from place to place.
In her wanderings under the name Lost Soul Maybe she came upon a castle where she was adopted by one named Atusha Avarus aka Lady Blue and was given the name Abariel Avarus. She served her new found mother for several years before moving to her sisters kingdom this was the kingdom of Elysium where she took on the name Abariel Avarus Avaritia.
After many years of serving both her mother an sister she struck out on her own to come upon a place called the Darktree Clan where she befreinded one named Angelus Darktree and became a sister to him a sword sister and was given the mark of the Darktree.
From here she served Darius Maryianov as his ArchKnight after being trained by Angelus. Each one of these clans she adopted the name of so she becuame Abariel Avarus Avaritia Darktree Maryianov. Serving there for many years she served the Queen of the Maryianov's a Silveren DrakenSire and in doing so she became Abariel Avarus Avaritia Darktree Maryianov DrakenSire.
When the clans fell Avarus, Maryianov and DrakenSire she moved onward to be captured by Trolls where she was made slave and sold from one to another being branded by each one. One day a man came who appeared to be human but in reality was a fallen/redeemed Angel and bought and freed her. Abariel now stayed because the man was kind to her and treated her with respect. She served him many long years until one day he asked her to become his mate which she glady accepted. They built a kingdom and called it DarcAbby empire of Azeroth and lived there happily...Abariel took on the name of the man and became Abariel Avarus Avaritia Darktree Maryianov DrakenSire Raven.
One Day she was visiting a freind in the kingdom of Deathly Love and a man approached her. He told her that he was her father, Leon Deathrider. She asked for proof and he showed her a dark unicorn and her own marking of a unicorn burned as only those of her bloods would do. He told her that he had saved her from the cutthroats that had killed his wife as he had to watch and took her to those foster parents that raised her. As she listened to him she was sickened and angered but continued to listen. After sometime she accepted what he was telling her and accepted him to a degree but not enough to adopt the name of Deathrider.
((I will tweak this as needed as my abilities change or character changes in some way so that no one has to keep asking they can just look))
Updated: 3/24/2008 Background history
Updated: 3/27/2008 Name
Updated: 6/19/2008 Names erased except 3
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boy- i missed u at school 2day, y weren't u there?
girl- yeah, i had to go to the doctor.
boy- oh realy? y?
girl- oh nothin, annual shots, thats all.
boy- oh
girl- so what did we do in math 2day?
boy- u didnt miss ne thing that
great.......just lots of notes
girl- ok good
boy- yeah
girl- hey i have a question......
boy- ok, ask away
girl-........how much do u love me?
boy- u kno i love u more than anything
girl- yeah.....
boy- y did u ask?
girl-................>silence<..........
boy- is something wrong?
girl- no nothing at all
boy- good.
girl- ..............how much do u care about me?
boy- i would give u the world in a
heartbeat if i could.
girl- u would?
boy- yeah.........of course i would >sounding worried< is there something wrong??
girl- no, everythings fine......
boy- are u sure?
girl- yeah.
boy- ok.......i hope so.
girl- ..............would u die for me?
boy- i would take a bullet for u anyday,
hun
girl- realy?
boy- anyday. now seriously, is there something wrong???
girl- no im fine, ur fine, we're fine, everyones fine.
boy- ............ok
girl-......................well i have to go ill c u 2morrow at school.
boy- alright, bye. I LOVE YOU.
girl- yeah, i love u 2, bye.
THE NEXT DAY AT SCHOOL:
boy- hey, have u seen my g/f 2day?
friend- no
boy- oh.
friend- she wasnt here yesterday either.
boy- i know, she was acting all wierd on
the phone last nite.
friend- well dude u kno how gurls are sumtimes
boy- yeah........but not her.
friend- idk wht else 2 say, man.
boy- k well i gotta get 2 english, ill c ya
after school.
friend- yeah i gotta get to science, ttyl.
THAT NIGHT:
-ring-
-ring-
-ring-
-ring-
girl- hello?
boy- hey
girl- oh, hi.
boy- y weren't u at school 2day?
girl- uh.......i had another doctor
appointment.
boy- are u sick?
girl- ..................um i have 2 go, my mom's
callin on my other line.
boy- ill wait.
girl- it may take a while, ill call u later.
boy-........alright, i love u hun.
very long pause<
girl- (with tear in her eye) look, i think we should break up.
boy- what???
girl- its the best thing for us right now.
boy- y????
girl- i love u.
click<
THE GIRL DOESNT COME TO SCHOOL FOR 3 MORE WEEKS, AND DOESNT ANSWER HER PHONE.
boy- hey dude
friend- hey
boy- whats up
friend- nothin, hey have u talked 2 ur ex
lately?
boy- no
friend- so u didnt hear?
boy- hear what?
friend- um idk if i should be the one to tell u......
boy- dude, wtf tell me
friend- uh....call this number....433-555-3468
boy- ok...........
BOY CALLS NUMBER AFTER SCHOOL
-ring-
-ring-
-ring-
voice- hello, suppam county hospital, this is nurse beckam.
boy- uh.......i must have the wrong number,
im looking for my friend.
voice- what is her name, sir?
(boy gives info)
voice- yes, this is the right number, she is one of our patients here.
boy- rele? y? what happened??? how is she???
voice- her room number is ..646, in building A, suite 3.
boy- WHT HAPPENED??!!!!
voice- plz come by sir and you can see her, goodbye.
boy- WAIT! NO!
*dial tone*
BOY GOES TO HOSPITAL, AND TO ROOM ..646, BUILDING A, SUITE 3. GIRL IS LYING IN THE HOSPITAL BED.
boy- omg are u ok??
girl- ..................
boy- sweetie!! talk to me!!
girl- i..........
boy- u what?? U WHAT???
girl- i have cancer and im on life support
boy- .....................>breaks into
tears<......................
girl- they're taking me off 2night
boy- y??
girl- i wanted 2 tell u but i couldnt
boy- y didnt u tell me????
girl- i didnt want 2 hurt u.
boy- u could never hurt me
girl- i just wanted 2 c if u felt bout me as the same i felt bout u.
boy- ?
girl- i love u more than anything, i would
give u the world in a heartbeat. i would die
for you and take a bullet for you.
boy- ...........
girl- dont be sad, i love u n ill always be
here w/u
boy- then y'd u break up w/me?
nurse- young man, visiting hours are over.
BOY LEAVES, GIRL IS TAKEN OFF LIFE SUPPORT, AND DIES.
but wht the boy didn't kno is that the girl only asked him those questions so she could hear him say it one last time, and she only broke up w/him because she knew she only had 3 more weeks to live, and thought it would cause him less pain and give him time to get over her before she died.
NEXT DAY
the boy is found dead with a gun in his hand..with a note in the other...
THE NOTE SAID:i told her i would take a
bullet for her....just like she said she would die for me...
(written by an Unknown)
=========================================================================================
"People once believed that when someone dies, a crow carries their soul to the land of the dead. But sometimes, something so bad happens that a terrible sadness is carried with it and the soul can't rest. Then sometimes, just sometimes, the crow can bring that soul back to put the wrong things right." ~The Crow~
Rene Almovodar
May 5 1984 - June 14 2006
REST IN PEACE
============================================================================
My beloved husband
of the soul and here in DarcAbby Empire of Azeroth
is DARC RAVEN I am proud to have him as such
============================================================================
My AP Family:
Mother(s):
Native Spirit
Spirit Mother
Niece(s):
Hidden Girl
Son:
JT Sammer
Daughters:
Forever Dreaming
MoonlightBeam
Water Dragon
Satanic-angel.
Uncle:
Cupids Chokehold (Justin)
==========================================================================
My Vampyre Family:
Mother:
BlueIsisQueenRaven
Daughters:
Spirit Winteria
Moonlight Beam
Water Dragon
Son:
Kennek DrakenSire
Uncle:
CountCrimsonMaryian
Nieces:
There are to many to list but I love you all.
Nephews:
Immortal Beloved
(on permnant Ban)
Sisters:
RosesViolentLullaby
VengenzeFell2Hate aka Silveren DrakenSire
Brother(s):
Kira666
Alastor236
Dante Drakensire
Wife:
My love and husband :
Darc Raven
If I have missed you it wasn't intentional. MY vampyric family is extensive and I dont' even know them all. This is the ones I do know
==========================================================================
My Character sheet for this character:
Name: Abariel Avarus Ravox(translates to "Raven")
Nickname or Alias: Abby
Race: Vampyress
Organization/Kingdom: DarcAbby empire of azeroth, Vampyre Family Avarus, Maryianove Dynasty others.
Age: 5000
Age appears to be: 48
Hair: Long to the floor worn usually down except in battle when it is in a pony tail or braid
Color: Raven Black with Gold tip highlights
Style: worn usually down except in battle when it is in a pony tail or braid
Eyes: Emerald Green
THAT ARE HIDING:
black with red pupils when angry or hunting
Height: 5'4 1/2
Weight: 150
Physical Build: muscular
Dominate Hand: right
Alignment: Normally good but will fight when I need to.
Equipment:
Weapons:Three Swords,Purity, and Death Purity is a white sword imbuded with the power of wind, Death is a black sword imbuded with poison and will cause death in the most horrible of manner an Angelic sword(summoned) Cuts the soul not flesh and all things of the void given by Darc Raven The only thing able to counter it is a daedra weapon and then only slightly., a soul sword picked up from when Fez Oldaron was killed in the forest of the damned by the listener, Three Daggers Fear Hope and Justice, Fear is imbuded with the ablity to terror in those it hits, Hope is imbuded iwth the ability to created utter hopelessness in the one it hits, And Justice is imbuded with the ability to make the one it hits see the evil deeds they have done causing insanity. A number of daggers and different throwing stars and poison darts upon my person All have poison in their blades and darts, All blades and stars are imbuded with the power to return to their owner, This includes the swords and daggers Soul Snatcher...once a bullet from hits it's target, the person or creature goes straight to hell without fail. (( Can be fused with elements and spells. )), Amulet that allows vampyre to go out into the sunlight given by her brother Dante Drakensire,A pair of armbands with silver blades that retract into them worn under long sleeves so that they are not seen given by Dante Drakensire
Clothing: Loose top and leather pants except in battle when I wear my battle armour of front plate, back plate , leggings and a helmet that goes all the way down my neck(all made out of tough dragon hide and scales almost completely damage proof by swords or daggers but there are open areas that can be hurt) and the gauntlets that have claws in it.
Special Abilities: healing, teleportation, conjuring, summoning, flying, shapeshifting and more as I learn the abilities.
Magic: (able to make daggers solid out of shadows and create images and just about anything your imagination can come up with that is why it is called shadow magick) Shadow magick, elementals wind, fire, water, ice, and earth(tires after several hours of using it), conjuring, and more as I learn it
Character Persona
Special Features: the darktree tattoo on my shoulder, a M for the maryianov ArchKnight tattooed into the base of my throat, various scars all over my body
Personality: Leader/follower quiet most of the time but will speak up amd say what she thinks especially when she thinks someone is being abused verbally or physically
Background/History:
Born on a small island in the Carribian. Her parents were purblood Vampyres who were killed by humans and lycans.
She was raised by foster parents who were both also pure blooded vampyres. They told her the story of her parents death and how they came to be her foster parents. The foster father taught her how to fight so she would never be unprepared and the foster mother taught her how to cook and hunt for food so she would never starve.
She when old enough left her island home in search of those that killed her parents and ended up wandering from place to place.
In her wanderings under the name Lost Soul Maybe she came upon a castle where she was adopted by one named Atusha Avarus aka Lady Blue and was given the name Abariel Avarus. She served her new found mother for several years before moving to her sisters kingdom this was the kingdom of Elysium where she took on the name Abariel Avarus Avaritia.
After many years of serving both her mother an sister she struck out on her own to come upon a place called the Darktree Clan where she befreinded one named Angelus Darktree and became a sister to him a sword sister and was given the mark of the Darktree.
From here she served Darius Maryianov as his ArchKnight after being trained by Angelus. Each one of these clans she adopted the name of so she becuame Abariel Avarus Avaritia Darktree Maryianov. Serving there for many years she served the Queen of the Maryianov's a Silveren DrakenSire and in doing so she became Abariel Avarus Avaritia Darktree Maryianov DrakenSire.
When the clans fell Avarus, Maryianov and DrakenSire she moved onward to be captured by Trolls where she was made slave and sold from one to another being branded by each one. One day a man came who appeared to be human but in reality was a fallen/redeemed Angel and bought and freed her. Abariel now stayed because the man was kind to her and treated her with respect. She served him many long years until one day he asked her to become his mate which she glady accepted. They built a kingdom and called it DarcAbby empire of Azeroth and lived there happily...Abariel took on the name of the man and became Abariel Avarus Avaritia Darktree Maryianov DrakenSire Raven.
One Day she was visiting a freind in the kingdom of Deathly Love and a man approached her. He told her that he was her father, Leon Deathrider. She asked for proof and he showed her a dark unicorn and her own marking of a unicorn burned as only those of her bloods would do. He told her that he had saved her from the cutthroats that had killed his wife as he had to watch and took her to those foster parents that raised her. As she listened to him she was sickened and angered but continued to listen. After sometime she accepted what he was telling her and accepted him to a degree but not enough to adopt the name of Deathrider.
((I will tweak this as needed as my abilities change or character changes in some way so that no one has to keep asking they can just look))
Updated: 3/24/2008 Background history
Updated: 3/27/2008 Name
Updated: 6/19/2008 Names erased except 3
============================================================================
boy- i missed u at school 2day, y weren't u there?
girl- yeah, i had to go to the doctor.
boy- oh realy? y?
girl- oh nothin, annual shots, thats all.
boy- oh
girl- so what did we do in math 2day?
boy- u didnt miss ne thing that
great.......just lots of notes
girl- ok good
boy- yeah
girl- hey i have a question......
boy- ok, ask away
girl-........how much do u love me?
boy- u kno i love u more than anything
girl- yeah.....
boy- y did u ask?
girl-................>silence<..........
boy- is something wrong?
girl- no nothing at all
boy- good.
girl- ..............how much do u care about me?
boy- i would give u the world in a
heartbeat if i could.
girl- u would?
boy- yeah.........of course i would >sounding worried< is there something wrong??
girl- no, everythings fine......
boy- are u sure?
girl- yeah.
boy- ok.......i hope so.
girl- ..............would u die for me?
boy- i would take a bullet for u anyday,
hun
girl- realy?
boy- anyday. now seriously, is there something wrong???
girl- no im fine, ur fine, we're fine, everyones fine.
boy- ............ok
girl-......................well i have to go ill c u 2morrow at school.
boy- alright, bye. I LOVE YOU.
girl- yeah, i love u 2, bye.
THE NEXT DAY AT SCHOOL:
boy- hey, have u seen my g/f 2day?
friend- no
boy- oh.
friend- she wasnt here yesterday either.
boy- i know, she was acting all wierd on
the phone last nite.
friend- well dude u kno how gurls are sumtimes
boy- yeah........but not her.
friend- idk wht else 2 say, man.
boy- k well i gotta get 2 english, ill c ya
after school.
friend- yeah i gotta get to science, ttyl.
THAT NIGHT:
-ring-
-ring-
-ring-
-ring-
girl- hello?
boy- hey
girl- oh, hi.
boy- y weren't u at school 2day?
girl- uh.......i had another doctor
appointment.
boy- are u sick?
girl- ..................um i have 2 go, my mom's
callin on my other line.
boy- ill wait.
girl- it may take a while, ill call u later.
boy-........alright, i love u hun.
very long pause<
girl- (with tear in her eye) look, i think we should break up.
boy- what???
girl- its the best thing for us right now.
boy- y????
girl- i love u.
click<
THE GIRL DOESNT COME TO SCHOOL FOR 3 MORE WEEKS, AND DOESNT ANSWER HER PHONE.
boy- hey dude
friend- hey
boy- whats up
friend- nothin, hey have u talked 2 ur ex
lately?
boy- no
friend- so u didnt hear?
boy- hear what?
friend- um idk if i should be the one to tell u......
boy- dude, wtf tell me
friend- uh....call this number....433-555-3468
boy- ok...........
BOY CALLS NUMBER AFTER SCHOOL
-ring-
-ring-
-ring-
voice- hello, suppam county hospital, this is nurse beckam.
boy- uh.......i must have the wrong number,
im looking for my friend.
voice- what is her name, sir?
(boy gives info)
voice- yes, this is the right number, she is one of our patients here.
boy- rele? y? what happened??? how is she???
voice- her room number is ..646, in building A, suite 3.
boy- WHT HAPPENED??!!!!
voice- plz come by sir and you can see her, goodbye.
boy- WAIT! NO!
*dial tone*
BOY GOES TO HOSPITAL, AND TO ROOM ..646, BUILDING A, SUITE 3. GIRL IS LYING IN THE HOSPITAL BED.
boy- omg are u ok??
girl- ..................
boy- sweetie!! talk to me!!
girl- i..........
boy- u what?? U WHAT???
girl- i have cancer and im on life support
boy- .....................>breaks into
tears<......................
girl- they're taking me off 2night
boy- y??
girl- i wanted 2 tell u but i couldnt
boy- y didnt u tell me????
girl- i didnt want 2 hurt u.
boy- u could never hurt me
girl- i just wanted 2 c if u felt bout me as the same i felt bout u.
boy- ?
girl- i love u more than anything, i would
give u the world in a heartbeat. i would die
for you and take a bullet for you.
boy- ...........
girl- dont be sad, i love u n ill always be
here w/u
boy- then y'd u break up w/me?
nurse- young man, visiting hours are over.
BOY LEAVES, GIRL IS TAKEN OFF LIFE SUPPORT, AND DIES.
but wht the boy didn't kno is that the girl only asked him those questions so she could hear him say it one last time, and she only broke up w/him because she knew she only had 3 more weeks to live, and thought it would cause him less pain and give him time to get over her before she died.
NEXT DAY
the boy is found dead with a gun in his hand..with a note in the other...
THE NOTE SAID:i told her i would take a
bullet for her....just like she said she would die for me...
(written by an Unknown)
=========================================================================================
"People once believed that when someone dies, a crow carries their soul to the land of the dead. But sometimes, something so bad happens that a terrible sadness is carried with it and the soul can't rest. Then sometimes, just sometimes, the crow can bring that soul back to put the wrong things right." ~The Crow~
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