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Soft Pale Love

Tall enough, jagged, broken,
Rocks at bottom call for blood

22 lines, December 31, 2007. In Sad, Angst, Dark, Hope
Cherry Blossom Passion

I do my best to read her
Savor every word

21 lines, December 31, 2007. In Sad, Pain, Dark
Dissect My Mindset

11 lines, 6 comments, December 28, 2007. In Dark, Adult, Sad

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Collab with Deindichter

This man had a rubber boot and a down sweater
Dilated eyes and a brain full of collie dog codeine

16 lines, December 2, 2008
The Human Mind (A Blueprint to Happiness)

There is a truth to this world, one that must become common knowledge if the soul is ever to stand upon a thrown made of manufactured happiness; and come to realize that all happiness must be manufactured if to become unshaka

5 lines, 1 comment, December 2, 2008
The Lifeblood of Society

Writing is the lifeblood of society, and In order to be free, one must first see the need to put a pen to a paper and scribble I AM ME. There is no... no other requirement to freedom other then the all mighty word, words such

6 lines, 1 comment, December 2, 2008
6 Feet Underneath Mother Nature

Sex is a metamorphosis, cold
Skeletal fingers grasp warm flesh

24 lines, 1 comment, December 2, 2008. In Nature, Dark, Death, Spiritual

Half Thing

Her claws dripped blood, and her fangs saliva as she stared at the particularly adipose victim before her. As the tall two leg trembled and spoke in its rasping ugly patt

350 lines, 1 comment, September 4, 2005. In <200 lines, Fantasy

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ICULookn on December 27, 2005

Wishing you and you family a most Happy New Year filled with joy peace and blessings iclookn
Waltz-of-the-Dead on August 9, 2005

Thanks again for commenting on my poetry and I appreciate you wanting to help me on the poem Wrath but I am going to delete because I'm over my bought of anger and I dont want to be reminded of how much of a bitch I am however your help, is something that I need and something that I will ask for. So if you are still interested in exctending a helpful hand here is my e-mail address Waltz_of_the_Dead@yahoo.com. Again comments like yours give me reason to continue to write and I hope to hear from you soon.
~KB~
Waltz-of-the-Dead on July 9, 2005

Thanks you so much for commenting on my poem, and took your advice and changed the 13th line...you were right it was kinda dull and boring, bad choice of words. I believe I have fixed it. Thanks again
Edited on Aug 09, 4:02 p.m. because ''.

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