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well, what can I say to describe myself?
I'm one of those normal agnst ridden emo kids who can't stop complaining about things and got into Marilyn Manson because of their obscure Goth sister.
I guess I should be more specific later when I have nothing to do...

-*I Be Kosher Muchly*-

what else...?

Fake Softdrink is like losing your virginity, 10 seconds of pain, 1 hour of crying and a lifetime of regret.

I hate people, I figured out I'm into diversity and pro Feminism, pro GLBT and such, but still I'm full of prejeduce, it seems I'm automatically inclined to hate stupid white people, shame really.

oh yeah! I hate AP, but at least I get to not lose my poetry when I write it =\
and also I couldnt be bothered to make a deviant art doodad cause I already have my own website for stuffs

www.GrimIrony.com
when you look, your mind (and probally your eyes) will never be the same

look at my poems please, maybe you'll get horribly exited
I was going to put up erotic poetry, but its still corny and the people I write it about wont let me put it up

Remember, Friendcest isnt as bad as incest, but you still feel bad about it.

anyways
YAY

  • Last seen 6 hours ago. Member since October 5, 2007.
  • I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 88 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "One of those Angsty, Finey, okayish, good, bad, sad and mad moods, like an all rounder".
  • I am a 16 year old guy (Australia)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Doing stuff with friends, talking mostly, but it all depends on what really happens I guess.
  • I am in the groups Do you want your poem read, The Group Of Life
  • I have 88 comments, 2 contests, 88 poems

Poems I'm focused on

  • Love is alike the cruellest master with the most painful whip, he whips the slave until they fall, then the slave is subjected to fresh atrocities. Love is the beautiful meadow were every sense is set into a fury of amaze
    14 lines, 3 comments, March 7, 2008. In Love
  • tears of fury, blood of pain
    all greets now, to be the same
    14 lines, March 7, 2008

My Poetry

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  • Let everybody, anybody and somebody
    testify the gruesome lie
    11 lines, October 22
  • You are there, my angel
    a perfect design to my heaven,
    23 lines, October 13
  • You have so much detatched treatment
    a solemn pity erupts due to your descent
    54 lines, September 16
  • Arsenic lions and knocked up scarecrows
    Jumping jacks and a lump of hair
    33 lines, September 7

Guest Book

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  • Alaula on June 18
    Hey thanks for commenting on my poems! It's been a while since I got such positive responses. I wrote them when I was about your age (aka ages ago) which might explain the "simple" rhymes Am I imagining or does one of your poems have a Hebrew title? (You're very good, btw)
  • Carebear-bubbles on June 12
    Hai
    i lost the chocolate
  • So bored! Lol how do you get over mind block? Coz ive got mayjor mind block and i hate it!
  • Great thanks, its flat 3, 60a trull road, taunton, somerset, england, ta1 4ql. Look forward to hearin from u x

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