Aim - FadedReflection3
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In my mind you never left,
Falling wasn't true.
I had faith you flew past the sky,
Straight through the night.
And the sun reflects the night,
Carrying the very same thing;
In your heart that saved me.
But maybe you've stopped listening.
Falling on my selfish ways,
It takes faith to see.
So close your eyes and search,
Deeper than just memories.
I never stopped believing in you and me,
Your leaving never changed things.
I've been here for too long,
To just walk away.
-The Best of Me-
Underoath
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Welcome.
This is a glance into my life. Nearly everything I write is based on the thoughts and emotions inside of me. Sometimes I intensify them, other times the words I use are understatements. Much of what I write filled with pain and sorrow, but do not confuse me with someone simply writing for pity’s sake. I’ve been places inside of me where I never wish to go back. So many events have taken me past my breaking point over the years, and I’m still learning to stand again. These poems hold my pains and sorrows, laughter and smiles, tears and broken places. They hold the very essence of my heart. I write to release the flood waters pent up within my soul. I write so that you may catch a glimpse of this vapor, my life. I write so that perhaps, you may identify and know that you are never alone. I write - because I love to. I will not change my words for anything, I am who I am. Nothing more, and nothing less. I really do like getting comments on my work, good or bad. Just be honest with me. However, *please do not paste my poem back to me with two words or less of your own.* I mean really, that has to be one of the most annoying things.
No Regrets,
-Rachel-
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In my mind you never left,
Falling wasn't true.
I had faith you flew past the sky,
Straight through the night.
And the sun reflects the night,
Carrying the very same thing;
In your heart that saved me.
But maybe you've stopped listening.
Falling on my selfish ways,
It takes faith to see.
So close your eyes and search,
Deeper than just memories.
I never stopped believing in you and me,
Your leaving never changed things.
I've been here for too long,
To just walk away.
-The Best of Me-
Underoath
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Welcome.
This is a glance into my life. Nearly everything I write is based on the thoughts and emotions inside of me. Sometimes I intensify them, other times the words I use are understatements. Much of what I write filled with pain and sorrow, but do not confuse me with someone simply writing for pity’s sake. I’ve been places inside of me where I never wish to go back. So many events have taken me past my breaking point over the years, and I’m still learning to stand again. These poems hold my pains and sorrows, laughter and smiles, tears and broken places. They hold the very essence of my heart. I write to release the flood waters pent up within my soul. I write so that you may catch a glimpse of this vapor, my life. I write so that perhaps, you may identify and know that you are never alone. I write - because I love to. I will not change my words for anything, I am who I am. Nothing more, and nothing less. I really do like getting comments on my work, good or bad. Just be honest with me. However, *please do not paste my poem back to me with two words or less of your own.* I mean really, that has to be one of the most annoying things.
No Regrets,
-Rachel-
- Last seen on Dec 4 3:50 PM 2007. Member since December 3, 2002.
- I'm a onyx dragon poet for 702 comments.
- I am a 18 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a worship leader in training.
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My Poetry
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Sometimes I think that maybe
It would be better if I faded far away -
These silver leaves and saplings
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“The wingless soar higher than all the angels, their dreams bring them far greater miracles than flight.”
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Lyra on December 15, 2005Raaaaaaachel!
I haven't talked to you in so very long x.x;
Well, I'm just going through everyone who has me on their favorites to wish them a Happy Holidays, so that means a Merry Chirstmas to you! Hope things have been going well at college. Good luck in the new year! -
Remaining000 on February 18, 2005Hey... I just wanted to check up on u chik. U havnt been around much on here. I know u aid u were leaving 4 college but I didnt quite know what u meant when u said u were leaving on the 13th. Anywayz, kep listening to the awesome music! and keep ur poems coming. God Bless, ~347~
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The Chartown Gent on January 16, 2005Check out my friend
http://allpoetry.com/poets/Rhodes -
Remaining000 on December 26, 2004I dont know how u culd tel that I was happy... but yeah. dont worry bout reading my poetry, i havnt written that much since I left and I havnt put but one new one on here.. so o well. Hope u had a merry christmas... for sum1 who doesnt like the holidays (me) mine went pretty good. ttyl.~Joy~
